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    dots Submission Name: The question about lovedots
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    Author: Destined
    ASL Info:    17/f/wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 86/68/17
    Words: 199
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
    Total Views: 357
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    Description:
       I just been... down I guess is the right word. I ask a lot of questions (If anyone didn't know) when I'm like this and this is one of them. It's just a rant, not a poem really.

    The last line: "If so, when is it that I will find that someone?" It's not like I want to date right now and this exact moment, it's just at times I get sort of sick when two people I know are like that and always seem to rub it in that they have someone and others don't. Call me selfish... or whatever, I don't care. I just... forget I won't even bother.

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    dotsThe question about lovedots
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    Do you love me or are you just saying mere words?
    For what does the word ‘love’ mean anyway?
    Is it when you cherish someone so deeply that you would even do wired things that others may dare you to do just to prove it?
    Or is it when you think about that person every waking moment that, even in the depths of the night, you dream sweet dreams about them?
    Maybe love is when you say the word to someone.
    For if you say the three words ‘I love you,’ that it makes it real even if later you bring them down.
    For no one really knows what the word mean so why is it that everyone flacks around saying the word, when the definition is unknown to even the most complex person.
    No math is needed to solve it and even a genius could tell you.
    Is love really, when you find someone you know seems to be part of your mind, body, and soul and if not, you will forever feel broken or unwholesome?


    If so, when is it that I will find that someone?




    Submitted on 2005-05-10 21:14:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      The English teacher in me wants to point out something. Did you mean, “Is it when you cherish someone (so) deeply that you would even do (weird) things that others may dare you to do just to prove it?” I liked how you spaced the last part away from the rest of the poem, but you should consider doing something to make it stand out, since I missed it the first time I read though and I think it makes the poem.
    | Posted on 2005-05-11 00:00:00 | by Cloud_lion | [ Reply to This ]
      As someone who's been married for 20 years [GOD he's old!] I can tell you those feelings don't last forever. But the emotion still stays. Don't ask me to explain that-I can't.
    I know it seems like it'll never come, but it will. Just be open to the possibilities. You never know what direction it'll come in.

    Peace,

    Joey
    | Posted on 2005-05-11 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
      Well like they say..It's the thought that counts. I like your ideas about love..clearly there's much more to it than just words that comes out from our mouths everytime we feel the urge to belong to somebody. Love has a deeper meaning than we can ever thought. Nice work my friend!
    | Posted on 2005-05-11 00:00:00 | by Joyce RL | [ Reply to This ]
      Well my little nananana I do love you and I would do weird things to prove it to you so you keep writing, but not comes the time when I point out the bad things you had some spelling errors and it is kinda heard to read the poem because it looks like a huge paragraph that we would write for Mr.k's gay ass class, putting it into stanzas might help with the reading part and nanana someone will love you if it's not now then it wll be later and i Love you and you know it!(didn't mean to sound harsh.)
    but i wuv ya
    ~liz~
    | Posted on 2005-05-10 00:00:00 | by Fadingperson | [ Reply to This ]



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