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    dots Submission Name: Withereddots
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    Author: kjb
    ASL Info:    21/male/NY
    Elite Ratio:    3.35 - 256/351/64
    Words: 210
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 206
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1233



    Description:
       Hey guys. THIS IS NOT MY WRITING! but oh do wish i could write like this. It's a song by my all time fav band... A Static Lullaby. i love them.


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    dotsWithereddots
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    "Withered"

    where did summer go?
    left me to wonder when the bottle will tap out.
    and the sun will arise.
    i woke up yesterday with a hole in my chest...

    (yet i feel no pain) numb to all feeling
    (like in winters chill) to feel the warmth from this bottle is useless
    (when you wake up it's gone) when you wake up it all starts again.

    i learned to break yesterday.
    destroy tomorrow.
    i've watched each leaf fall off my tree.
    i've watched the seasons change.

    (yet i feel no pain) numb to all feeling
    (like in winters chill) to feel the warmth from this bottle is useless
    (when you wake up it's gone) when you wake up it all starts again.

    (why?) it all starts again
    (why step aside when you fall back in place?) it all starts again
    (why? why? why?)
    (Oh misery is so beautiful...)

    (yet i feel no pain) numb to all feeling
    (like in winters chill) to feel the warmth from this bottle is useless
    (when you wake up it's gone) when you wake up it all starts again.

    i need this...




    Submitted on 2005-05-11 04:39:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It would be interesting to hear this with the music... that's the thing with lyrics, usually (especially with dark ones) the music has a lot more to say than the words. The imagery is good, but the words used are kinda the same ol' same ol'...
    | Posted on 2005-05-11 00:00:00 | by WhisperShout | [ Reply to This ]



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