Keeping out the Karoake Bar... -------------------------------------------
"Keeping out the Karoake Bar Dreams"
or "I met the Son of a Non-Denominational Preacher Man (attempt 3)"
I met the son of a preacher man
on a cold Saturday night in April
when snow fell from the sky
shocking us all.
We sat on the stone-cold ground
and discussed life with sordid tones
never questioning the other's sincerity
as each of was encased in snow.
Solidarity seemed to request definitiveness
from the non-denominational
preacher man's son
and the Catholic girl from too far-off
but none was given
(nor discussed)
and so it began
(the
one night,
once-in-a-lifetime chance meeting
which reeks of
regret
tragedy
nostalgia, for what?
and what was it about that cold which kept
the karoake bar dreams away from that corner
of my life
and why is it that
I can't seem to forget it?)
wow i really liked this one emo. i think that the last 2 lines really sumed it up and gave it a lot of power. great work i am suprised it took you three atemps. i thought you were perfect. lol. well good work lia
Submission Name: Keeping out the Karoake Bar...
