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    dots Submission Name: Sonnet 155 A Tributedots
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    Author: freak_like_me
    ASL Info:    18/female/Ireland
    Elite Ratio:    4.79 - 111/109/41
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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       My tribute to shakespeare echoing his beautiful sonnet 130 about true and generalisations of his wife in the elizabethan centurion. I love him.


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    dotsSonnet 155 A Tributedots
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    How she loves to hear his elements of honesty
    Sonnet 130, a poem of excellent academy
    Never resorting to exaggeration or philiosophy
    Man I studied thy poem for the night, only one
    And by god amongst pre 1914, it shone
    Only because of its incredibility, it was beyond
    A light year of your work William Shakespeare
    I had formally renown this piece, now to hear
    A generalisation of words, to great to hold near
    Indeed sir William, you be not harsh at all
    Yours faithfully, Antoinette Marshall




    Submitted on 2005-05-11 18:12:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I felt like this poem was akward. The rhyme scheme is not that of a sonnet, and neither is the structure. But, I'm not sure that was what you were going for either. I think that you could do a whole lot more with this. You first need to look up the rhyme scheme and structure for a sonnet and then, you should allude to one of Shakespeares sonnets to strengthen your tribute.
    | Posted on 2005-05-19 00:00:00 | by cerberus | [ Reply to This ]
      Been a while since I read a sonnet. A fresh, wonderful ode to a womderful man.. Theres a sense of humour in this too, together with you trying to comprehend the depth of feeling you feel for Shakespeare and the sonnet that has touched you so.

    Man I studied thy poem for the night
    This is just my favourite line, you mange to use both Shakespearean language AND modern day slang, without it being out of place..it actually added a nice touch...

    I like how you ended it. That just shows how sometimes a surname can work to your advantage. ;)

    Thanks for the read.
    | Posted on 2005-05-13 00:00:00 | by pennyroyal tea | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a great poem! i understand by this poem that you like william shakespeare? i like him>my opinion is this: that bram stoker and edgar allen poe and william shakespeare are by far the best poets/story writers i have ever known. this is a great read and i appreciate you letting me read it> great> love it> want moreHEHEHE
    | Posted on 2005-05-11 00:00:00 | by gothichik1 | [ Reply to This ]



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