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    dots Submission Name: A Cry On The Cliffdots
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    Author: Desser
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    3.83 - 89/95/44
    Words: 169
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
    Total Views: 236
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    dotsA Cry On The Cliffdots
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    O howl at the moon my dear old friend,
    I quiver and twitch when you're around me.
    I cry your name and wait for the end.

    Hear the kind trumpet sound, what does it send?
    A message we did not want to be
    A howl at the moon by my dear old friend.

    Is it the time of our pitiful trend?
    Our companion is gone, lost at sea,
    His name we cry and wait for the end.

    Tombstones lit, so bright that I intend
    To reel his body back, all of it so empty.
    We'll howl at the moon for my dear old friend.

    Joy not sorrow will keep us and will tend
    To hold us together as one country,
    And we'll cry his name until the end!

    Freedom we have, even without his amend,
    And we'll see the light come up in our victory.
    O howl at the moon my dear old friend,
    I've cried your name and now it is the end.




    Submitted on 2005-05-11 18:54:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i really like this piece. this isn't just the typical poem about the death of someone close. it could be physical death or mental, even just growing apart from an old friend, whatever your definition is of death. it's got a fantastic element in it that makes it somehow surreal while being a subject that is in a lot of people's heatrs and minds. keep up the awesome work!
    | Posted on 2005-05-11 00:00:00 | by Anticlownperson | [ Reply to This ]
      i think that this was a very intoresting piece. i dont think i have read a piece like this before. i am not sure what excactally you are talking about in this piece but i like the fllow and the set up. good work. lia
    | Posted on 2005-05-11 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]



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