Trust a Shadow by ax2x3m

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Submission Name: Trust a Shadow dots

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Author:	ax2x3m
ASL Info:	21/m/Philippines
Elite Ratio:	2.53 - 24/24/14
Words:	114

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	260
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	686

Description:
hard to describe because it just flowed out in the span of 5 minutes... probably about being able to trust some despite his dark reputation or what others think of him...

something like that

Trust a Shadow dots

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stash me, a grip knock door haunts me
we can hide and seek me
as elements ascend from the floor
and shake hands with the psyche

lash me, stock pile of humanity crush me
we can fly and die me
try to ascend to a celestial opening
and fall to a black hole sarcastic

its branded in my brain
a cross breed angel wing serial killer

will you trust a shadow, risk nail bites
will you trust a shadow, lose eye sight
gather together, flock like birds
carry us to a we and lose the ego

with this we could build a skyline
fly by, and highlight our day beautiful

Submitted on 2005-05-12 10:43:25 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  This is really good and very intresting. I got a few really good images from it, and I love the way you wrote this. Keep up the great work!
| Posted on 2005-05-12 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]
  very interesting. Like Geraldine i didn't quite understand it at the beginning. THe words had a good flow to them and were veryn strong though, great write.
| Posted on 2005-05-12 00:00:00 | by danflor4 | [ Reply to This ]
  not bad... it was a little choppy. will u trust a shadow stanza was nice. i could really feel the imagery there. the idea was nice but i feel it could have been presented a little better. not bad tho keep it up
-sun
| Posted on 2005-05-12 00:00:00 | by Sun | [ Reply to This ]
  It was good. I didn't really understand it at the beginning, but it got better the further I read. So it was a little confusing, but still pretty good.
Geraldine
| Posted on 2005-05-12 00:00:00 | by Geraldine | [ Reply to This ]

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