Being curious perison translation nosey lol your title capture my attention. Then your description was interesting so on to your poem I read and find this alliteration maddness..."Silently sneaking, sour sentiments slip. Intellectual ideas ignite integration. Total termination turns to terror. Yesterday's yawns yield to yells." wow! Major brain twister. `always write poetry, Chery.
I really like this idea, and you got through without a nitch. Excellent use of alliteration. I love how even though it's a bit tougue-twisterish, it all means something. Very cool. Nice write, very creative!
You have made extremely interesting use of alliteration, I have seldom seen every word in a line having the same letter and the result has a very rhythmis effect. The poem is though, a little short, at times it doesn't make too much sense, and it leaves me with the odd feeling that it is unfinished. A bit of editing would be a good idea, or maybe too phrase it better, a little bit of tweaking. The poem has too much merit, in my opinion, for one to not try to improve it to its fullest.
I Like This A Lot. It's Interesting How You Made Every Word In The Line To Have The Same Letter As The First Word Of Each Sentence. And You Made It So That Everything Made Sense And It Didn't End Up Like Some Badly Written Random Poem. Maybe I Should Try Challenging Myself To Doing Something Like This. Anyhow. This Is Something Worth Adding To My Fav's. Hope To Hear More From You. And If You Do Another Piece Like This, Let Me Know! I'd Be Glad To Read It! Take Care.
This is an awesome idea. I think I might have to try this sometime. The write turned out great I think. I agree with treybur, you set up some strict rules but still produced a wonderful piece. Awesome job!
very imaginative and unique. you did a great job and much better than I could have especially with the y's. I too think you found all the perfect words and summed up curiosity to a tee! I really enjoyed reading something fun for a change.