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    dots Submission Name: The Madagascar Hat Theorydots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Story/Love
    Total Views: 549
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       I picked up a wonderful beach hat @ the Thrift Store. Hand made in Madagascar, when 'i' wear it 'i' feel mysterious and divine!

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!


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    dotsThe Madagascar Hat Theorydots
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    Kaminski, Australia
    swept in a
    Madagascar hat.
    Hand weaved of
    the desert and
    "IT's" heat, where
    the ocean and
    nowhere
    meet.
    Was wind or wave
    or rain?
    No matter now
    a sand's
    grain.
    Swept up by
    the wings of
    a bird and nested
    in the home of Love.
    Where does the
    Madagascar Hat
    call home today?
    everywhere ~ "IT"
    floats on your winds
    and dangles from stars
    to play ; > }
    Secret of the
    Madagascar Hat
    not hidden in sea
    or land.
    The wave of another's
    suntanned hand.
    Nature's riddle responded
    to with Grace.
    All are witness to his
    loving face.
    The hat casts a
    halo in blue
    and of gold,
    The hat's graced All
    the young & Old.
    It's not a big mystery
    but a story that's
    told.
    Put on the hat and
    watch "IT"
    unfold.





    Submitted on 2005-05-12 21:01:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Great line about the suntanned hand, and
    it floats on the wind and dangles from the stars.
    Little treasure's us. Can't beat em. Great write really did enjoy this one. Oh one more thing hope we can find you hidden in that hat.
    | Posted on 2005-05-15 00:00:00 | by childs | [ Reply to This ]
      Woo hoo! Hatz r kewl! Hopefully this wonderfully mysterious beach hat will fill you with LOVEPEACEJOY :) this was quite an enjoyable poem as usual :)

    Yee HAw :)

    Stw
    | Posted on 2005-05-13 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]
      Tiff, I think you should trade your hat in for a halo, you're an angel!
    I don't really care what the secret of the Madagascar hat is - I want one!
    Great Tiffspeak,
    Be HappIT
    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-05-12 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]


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