more. that would be my first thought: there should be more than this because you have simply set a scene here. you have given us a synopsis of how it is to love, be loved and get hurt on the way and to that end you are telling us little that we don't know already. I would like to see the journey described fully, in the same travelogue manner as this but with a dissection of each painful or joyous interlude. patently more than able to give us this; it's simply down to whether you want to or not. dare... K
nice twist with the bit about turning, if that makes sense. the nice thing is that you dont specifically say what it is that you are passionate about. athough i think i know what most would guess it could also be applied to music, art whatever...its just nice to have that bit more flexablity that allows that you might be passionate about more than one thing ;) thanks for sharing short but sweet
Short, but effective in its' conveyance of the sentiment. I liked the word play and the emotion came through effectively. It is difficult to write a short piece and have the meaning make it larger. Nice work.
Ha! I like this! I've been... how do you say... "around the block once or twice," and I'm no expert and probably never will be. However, learning learning, learning will never end. And when it comes to passion... well no one will ever fully be versed on this subject. As to your piece... simple, effective; your use of words, to me, make the reader happy to understand much without reading a book. Cheers!