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    dots Submission Name: Lie To Me (revisied)dots
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    Author: ashlee_jane2003
    ASL Info:    24-female-Indianapolis
    Elite Ratio:    3.39 - 210/210/39
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 237
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       This is a re-write of something from not that long ago. I think that it kind of speaks for its self.


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    dotsLie To Me (revisied)dots
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    It doesn't have to be real...
    What you say and what you feel.
    Just hold me for a little while;
    I'll stay living in denial.

    And with your every touch...
    I'll think you love me so much.
    Even with just a kiss...
    I'll believe my life's in bliss.

    But I know that it won't last.
    The feeling will fade away so fast.
    My life will go back to it's lonely hell.
    Back to the pain I know so well.




    Submitted on 2005-05-13 16:09:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked this.im in this situation, where i just wish the guy still loved me, and how id give anything if he loved me again.it hurts.alot, i can relate.good write
    | Posted on 2005-05-13 00:00:00 | by whatever14 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is kinda short, but good. I wish you had written a little bit more though. Well, I think you had a good idea, and trust me I know how you feel. You've got talent; keep writing!
    Cheers,
    ~Persephone~
    | Posted on 2005-05-13 00:00:00 | by Persephone | [ Reply to This ]



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