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    dots Submission Name: To Whom It May Concerndots
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    Author: Anchiale
    ASL Info:    32/F/AL
    Elite Ratio:    3.56 - 88/73/14
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 1227
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 843



    Description:
       I wrote this for someone very special to me


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    dotsTo Whom It May Concerndots
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    I want to sing
    lift up my praises of how good you are..
    I want to write this poem but,
    how do you put on paper
    what isn`t already written on your face and in your heart?
    If I did, would you even care?

    In my heart there`s a void
    of which only you can fill
    The distance between us
    makes me aware of how cruel
    circumstances can be, even still
    you never cease to amaze me.
    A man of your caliber IS in high demand, however your breed is dying rapidly....

    Dying like the reservations in my mind
    I`ve had love and been loved before
    but never like this, you define...

    My dreams for perfection,
    Intelligence and success mixed with
    sophistication and affection...
    you are my soul`s connection.




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      you define...

    My dreams for perfection,
    Intelligence and success mixed with
    sophistication and affection...
    you are my soul`s connection.


    OMGosh.. I love this. I see that i have already commented, but i feel this way soooooo often, so often. I will be adding this to my fav's. Especially since I still love it after all of this time..
    Awesome!
    | Posted on 2004-09-24 00:00:00 | by Oracle | [ Reply to This ]


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