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    dots Submission Name: tHE Madagascar Hat pt. DEUXdots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 624
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 465



    Description:
       Let us run 2 tHE h2o'z edge & peer so closely 4 tenderness; a blue, green halo of LOVE.

    Love,Peace,Joy!!!
    Great & Special WeEkEnd!
    epiph the tiff
    here in a jif
    eat Peter Pan
    not Jif
    been here
    lately?Had
    an
    epiph:>~>@#>?#??@@!:!K


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    dotstHE Madagascar Hat pt. DEUXdots
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    The girl of Iponemaa
    blooming flowerz
    IN
    HER
    a
    i
    r
    River Dance
    on
    H2o'z
    ~~~~~~~~~~
    jGinger Roger'z
    X
    FredAstairz
    Splashing currentz
    ; deep green
    Sea
    u
    r
    f
    IN
    Green
    i
    v
    iN
    n
    girl ; > }




    Submitted on 2005-05-14 17:29:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Waves...waves are what I see from this. Flowing and dancing girl...river giving strength and inspiration...from a meditative moment on a flowing current of blue/green waves. Thanks for sharing your moment of zen. This was beautiful and will make the day great. Have a great one and super duper smile to you :-)
    | Posted on 2005-05-16 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey, nice bit of Tiffspeak! I went back to the first one to tie this in, and yep, it ties.
    Tiffany, your mind would make a hell of a tv show! (and certainly not a reality show! LOL)
    Go, Bubbles, how about you teach him to surf?
    be happy
    Graeme
    | Posted on 2005-05-15 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
      Woo HOO! Go Madagascar hat GO! I always wanted to go to Madagascar...but only because I use it as a base to conquer the world (ala Risk! :)...The only hat that I wear is my cape with the face of Goofy on it with big floppy ears...I then turn it backwards and Do my gangsta rap dance with it on WORD!

    STw

    More HAtz!
    | Posted on 2005-05-15 00:00:00 | by Stwcjj | [ Reply to This ]


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