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    Author: Destined
    ASL Info:    17/f/wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 86/68/17
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 216
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1060



    Description:
       At times I get annoyed when people tell me to update on Livejournal.com and tell them how I feel and what is going on. All I can say is, I will when the time is right. Meanwhile, I'll do what is needed.

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    I don’t talk much of my feelings,
    What is there to say?
    My posts aren’t very long,
    As I continue to talk about ‘what an interesting day.’

    I don’t tell my parent how I feel,
    There’s no need to worry them.
    I hide things from my friends,
    In fear of being condemned.

    So, I went on Livejournal.com,
    Thinking, I could tell others how I feel.
    But, if I tell the truth,
    It will only hurt those most dear.

    I bottle up every emotion I have,
    Hiding the truth from the world.
    All the emotions I feel,
    Then start to slowly unfurl.

    It’s not like I wish it,
    I don’t want to hurt those I love.
    But back off,
    This is what I speak of.

    I am me,
    Like it or not.
    Nothing will change of me,
    Not even by a long shot.

    I will tell you how I feel,
    When I know it is right.
    However, till that day will come,
    All I can say is, ‘good night.’




    Submitted on 2005-05-14 20:59:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like this.
    It's a unique concept and I like how it comes across as both slightly humourous and also as expressing ones emotional self..
    Bottling emotions until they 'unfurl'...well it might be better to tell friends/family in a sane way rather than waiting for it to come out as a volcano, which trust me is more embarrasing.
    Thanks for this read though, I really liked. And I like how you ended it. cheers.
    | Posted on 2005-05-15 00:00:00 | by pennyroyal tea | [ Reply to This ]



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