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    dots Submission Name: Nubian Nationdots
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    Author: _The Truth_
    ASL Info:    19/M/NC
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 5/4/3
    Words: 547
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 1295
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 3091



    Description:
       This poem is to my people and just to see how far my skill went.


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    dotsNubian Nationdots
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    I am a brotha that loves & values lyfe
    And since I’m black I have to constantly fight
    Against the oppressor and the haters that discriminates
    And the only way to conquer this trial is to give my conflicted burden to god and just wait
    For a blessing to rain down on me
    As I continue to help my Nubian nation to believe
    That we can press on no matter what the opposition
    We need to hold fast to one another and fight the infliction
    Put upon us because of the tone of our skin
    Let us lift our heads to the heavens and be persistent to win
    That ultimate goal bestowed upon us
    To walk the stairway to the heaven as god continue to love us
    Because we are his children in his all seeing eyes
    We have to live this temporary lyfe with strong will and that Nubian pride
    As we as a Nubian Nation as one strive to survive
    We will show a white world that Black America is alive
    Waking up to a beautyful Nubian Queen day by day
    I have a strong Black Woman to help me adapt to lyfe’s change
    She is, we are, I am, he is, and they are BLACK AMERICA
    God wants to send this world a message I am merely the carrier
    I’m no hustla, pusha, gangsta, faka, hata I’m a black man and non-of thee above
    Why hate on our follow brotha we should lift him up
    And not bring him down
    Because as we help each other what was lost can be found.
    Nubian Nation arise and come forth as a family not as a group
    Let us stand together strong and versatile then there’s no reason to lose
    Help my mother on the street corner from selling body for profit
    All to buy that pure rock and provide for nine kids
    Help my father understand that leaving corrupts lives
    SO that the mother would be subjected to tell hurtful lies
    Help my big sista from getting beat down by her husband
    You have to let go sumtimes no matter how hard it is or how much you love him
    Help my be brother with that habit that he has
    Before he catches sumen that’ll make him die slow and fast
    Help my lil sista accomplished her goals
    Encourage her to live long and find a man to help her carry on
    Help my lil brotha understand being a hustla makes you a statistic
    His mind hears the rhythm, but his heart needs not listen to the lyrics
    Help my soon to be young mother know that she shouldn’t kill
    She should live with her blessing and stay strong in god’ will
    Help my young father understand he should stand stronger
    Not leave and run from his responsibilities but let his child have the pleasure of a father
    Help “The Truth” be known across the globe
    That the Nubian Nation will soon rise and take the world by storm
    We all need a hand to hold
    God is there to mend our prideful heart when they are broken
    Let us come and stand together as we realize
    That Our black America will soon and surly arise
    AS A NUBIAN NATION




    Submitted on 2005-05-14 21:25:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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