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    dots Submission Name: DON'T!!dots
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    Author: steph1011
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 34/45/25
    Words: 151
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 281
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 992



    Description:
       Well it might be hard to follow.. The chorus is when she is thinking of the past. When someone is following her, trying to rape her.. The verses are after it all happen, she is just trying to live her life, but she thinks that someoen will alwways be following her. Enjoy, comment please.


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    dotsDON'T!!dots
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    Waiting to hop on a ride
    a ride that I can cling to you
    where I put my arms around yours
    and put my head on your shoulder
    where I can close my eyes
    and know that I am safe

    Don't look
    you know you don't want to
    Don't stop
    you know you can't wait
    Don't speak
    You know there will be moans
    Don't fall
    You know you don't want to, get hurt.
    Stop

    We are finally to a end
    where I can give you a hug
    tell you I love you
    Walk with you
    be close to you
    know that my past won't be near
    cause I need you for my protection

    Don't look
    you know you don't want to
    Don't stop
    you know you can't wait
    Don't speak
    You know there will be moans
    Don't fall
    You know you don't want to, get hurt.
    Stop




    Submitted on 2005-05-15 14:46:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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