Description: I know this is a vent, I try to avoid doing this but its kind of like wen u have one small idea then within minutes u trying adding to it. I have alot fo word play in here keep in mind, i tend to make up my own words, im a bit like john clare i suppose, but hes a good writer regardless
This is a really good write.. I never thought of this that way... One word.. Ughhh usually means more than one meaning.. Sometimes its good and sometimes it bad... right now some of my classmates... would be like ew. But I think this was an excellent write..
Whoa. There was something....rad...about this poem. I'm not even sure if calling it a poem is quite right....I've never read anything quite like it I don't think. Just your style...it was kinda choppy and all over the place and just...peppered! Haha, I've never heard something descibed as peppered. I think that's why I liked it, I came across something new. Peppered...haha! I felt peppered today. My eyes were....all these little molecules of peppered tears (haha! I used your word! lol) appeared in my eyes... ahhh....and Sgt. Pepper! Haha! Sry. Alright well...thanks for throwing a bit of color on canvas...peace...
Submission Name: Peppered Feelings
