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    dots Submission Name: Shabnamdots
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    Author: Khaled AbdAllah
    ASL Info:    22 - male - Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    4.2 - 129/137/30
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1047
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 423



    Description:
       I wrote this poem to show how much I do care to my dear friend Shabnam. And also my dear Egyptian friends, Maher, Mustafa and Gamal.
    Hope you'll all like it.


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    dotsShabnamdots
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    Life is like a long way.
    which needs a fellow.
    Someone who advice.
    You with no benefits.
    We are nothing without
    Our dear friends and fellowers.
    One'll always need someone.
    To trust and keep his secrets.
    Will you always be that one, Shabnam?
    Will we go along this long way?
    As for myself, I'll always
    Be sincere and loyal to you.




    Submitted on 2005-05-16 16:58:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hi There I am just speechless. I have dedicated a poem to me, I couldn't have asked for anything better then that.
    To answer your question asked in your poem yes I will, as long as humans will need oxygen to live I will be your friend. I am honoured to be your friend. It is a lovely poem. I simply love. I am gust too happy, so I donít know what to write.
    Thank you so so so so so much.
    With lots of love your friend shabnam
    | Posted on 2005-05-19 00:00:00 | by shabnam | [ Reply to This ]


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