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Behind Those Fucked Up Eyes

Author: Chicool2
ASL Info:    17/f/Pennsylvania
Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 266 /260 /60
Words: 152
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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Just something I needed to write..........

Yes, this is true. All of it

Behind Those Fucked Up Eyes

In a second the blast had ended
My fears had relapsed all at once
To the way I used to be

Of you

When I saw your eyes
I was scared
Because it was fucked up behind
I couldn't understand
How this shit took over me
All at once

I didn't want to return
To this kind of logic
Thinking of you
Between every breath
Because behind those fucked up eyes....

I saw some truth
I saw happiness
I saw a lot of things you had never seen
I saw beyond those deep eyes
That made my skin tingle and my knees weaken
I just needed you so
To be my one, my only
To complete my evergrowing world
To be part of my future

And to help you see beyond
Those Fucked up
Deep Blue

Submitted on 2005-05-16 19:30:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  [censored] incredible. that was brilliant work. it happens to everybody and i think that's the appeal of it. i love someone that i don't want to and everybody says to let it go but how can you help it?~nahlij
| Posted on 2005-05-31 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
  ahh honey this is amazing. with all the ones below me...i was left speachless upon reading this. you captured these emotions so well and really made me feel it. wow, has to be in my fav's! honestly can't speak right now... (clap, clap, clap, clap) ((stands to clap some more))
| Posted on 2005-05-17 00:00:00 | by _winky_ | [ Reply to This ]
  When I saw the title it sounded familiar.. there is a song called behing these hazel eyes.. Oh well, at first i thought you were talking about his legs...
But its really emtional, sorry I don't have a lot to write... its just I got to go...
| Posted on 2005-05-17 00:00:00 | by XxStephyxX04 | [ Reply to This ]
  Fu<king MASTERFUL! You’re 14? For serious?
Thys is some top notch shyte right here! Fu<king unbelievable!- your way with words is utterly mind-blowing. I thought I was pretty good- AND I’m old! You keep thys up- I can only imagine where you’ll go!
...And trust me- I don’t kiss @$$ lyke thys. So feel honored. Lolful!
I agree with below- change NOTHING- thys is... wonderfully painful...

Peace, love and yellow jackets- The Madd One~
| Posted on 2005-05-17 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]
  YES! I LOVE THIS ONE! made me feel emotions i cant describe...really made me feel them....the part i liked best was the last stanza, this is a perfect poem. nothings wrong with it, that i can see and judge in my point of view. wow this is REALLY amazing! one of my new faves!

| Posted on 2005-05-16 00:00:00 | by Nirvana | [ Reply to This ]
  oh this is sooo damn gud! u r massively talented - got me feeling strong emotions. especially loved the " i saw . . . " repetition
Keep spreading the love
| Posted on 2005-06-01 00:00:00 | by AfricanPrincess | [ Reply to This ]
  This is really good. I can definitely relate. I love someone I don't want to love. It's a lot harder to actually let go than it is to say it. Nicely done. I think a lot of people can relate.
| Posted on 2005-06-10 00:00:00 | by AngelOutlaw | [ Reply to This ]
  Let it out honey...let it all out! You did a great job with expression. You clearly spoke your mind with nothing held back. I admire that in you. You kept it very simple yet straight to the point.

He sounds to me to actually be pretty blind with those blue eyes.


li li
| Posted on 2005-08-23 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]

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