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    dots Submission Name: agony of the minddots
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    Author: painfullyme
    ASL Info:    23/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 335/456/72
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 226
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 350



    Description:
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    dotsagony of the minddots
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    tiny cuts along a vein
    draw out the life within
    trace the laceration
    as it curves along the skin
    carve out designs
    in sanguine lines
    engrave the agony
    of the mind
    embed the misery
    take your time
    and search for solace in life
    it can be found in this celestial knife
    *




    Submitted on 2005-05-16 21:19:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i agree.eloborate more why that knife is youre savior.the cuts,and the insturment
    what the cuts remind you of,protrayd alright
    i want to know the reason.
    start at the begiening please
    and be as descriptive and it will shine
    all one mans opinion

    cool
    wes all toyysruss
    | Posted on 2005-05-17 00:00:00 | by toyysruss | [ Reply to This ]
      I thought this poem was pretty in its own way. Shot, brief and filled with appealing imagery. The only thing i didn't like is that this topic is so over done. the whole cutting..bleeding..and collapsing mind. although you've described it better than others, i think you could be a little more original next time.
    | Posted on 2005-05-16 00:00:00 | by brokensmile | [ Reply to This ]



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