Pain of the heart -------------------------------------------
Why do you love me
Isn't it over with you
You keep on telling me
I love you
But the truth is I hate you
Even if I dont want to
Why are you doing this to me
Cant I go free
I'll never again belong to you
Please release me
'cauz one day you'll kill me
I have already read this one, but I never commented...I wonder why... I like it. It reminds me of the times when people say "I think we need a break" But then everytime you talk to them they are all "You do know that I loved you, right?" and the "I still love you, we just needed some space"
If you TRULY love someone, space will only do just that, build a bigger gap in your relationship, space = broken!
I thought I'd already commented on this! oh well.. this was a really sad poem, though it was shortish. But it was good in it's shortness, hope to read more from you!
I have a feeling that this write is very personal to you but I suggest that you add some more images in it so the readers could picture your emotions well. Readers can relate to the beauty of simplicity you portray but I just can't help but ask for more. It's a good write and your title is striking. Just a few more words would make your work great. Good job!
Submission Name: Pain of the heart
