in moments brief we meet in shadowed groves before the rain. together chasing green.
you sound like some one who may just understand.
it reminds me of "Imaginary" by Evanescence. it was your lines about blurred reality that drew me in. i problem that some of us suffer from worse than others. when personal fiction is only a heart beat away. the rhym scheme seems to take aware from it atleast for me. but that s a personal hang up.
And yet again, I relate to this poem also. I've had that problem so much these past few years because of my dislike for this world and life. I buried myself into another world, with others online, to game and be in a place where outsiders don't bother us. It feels safe there, and I can relate to it in this poem... To feel stuck in two lives, almost, it seems like... That's how it feels between those two sides.. that you can't stay in one place... you want something you can't have, basically. I understand that very well. About the poem, I must say there's many mispellings, but the only one that bothered me was that fantasy was mispelled. Since it is the main thought of the poem, I just wanted to let you know. As for me, I should write some more poetry. Keep writing the awesome poetry. -emoCatGirl
I very much enjoyed this poem. It gives the reader a feeling of being lost in fantasy, but caught up in reality. I know that there's times I wish myself that I could get lost in my fantasies, although I'd never leave if I didnt' have to. lol. I think you wrote this clearly, and it has a good structure and flow. Great job hun! Keep up the good work :)