Description: this is an exploit of the inner world we all create and live in. some call it a fantacy, others call it our percenption of the world and how it could/should be.
In Between -------------------------------------------
Darkness is the void between
all your rights and wrongs
ill concocted ideas
that you know just dont belong
its hard living in your fantacy
while being pulled back to reallity
when the two worlds become a blur
and you cant pull them apart again
the darkness is whats in between
killing you from within
i want to go to my fantacy world
and never come back
where this place fills the happyness
that in reallity i lack
my fantacy tells a story
the story has no end
it tells you what you want to hear
over and over again
the fantacy's an addiction
a sickened oblivious obsession
it is ofen critisized and harrassed
only to be met with objection
i wnat to live in fantacy
but reality pulls me near
im stuck between in darkness
facing my greatest fears
i'll neverlive in fantacy
until my reallity is gone
then i can live in the world i've created
forever and ever on.
in moments brief we meet in shadowed groves before the rain. together chasing green.
you sound like some one who may just understand.
it reminds me of "Imaginary" by Evanescence. it was your lines about blurred reality that drew me in. i problem that some of us suffer from worse than others. when personal fiction is only a heart beat away. the rhym scheme seems to take aware from it atleast for me. but that s a personal hang up.
And yet again, I relate to this poem also. I've had that problem so much these past few years because of my dislike for this world and life. I buried myself into another world, with others online, to game and be in a place where outsiders don't bother us. It feels safe there, and I can relate to it in this poem... To feel stuck in two lives, almost, it seems like... That's how it feels between those two sides.. that you can't stay in one place... you want something you can't have, basically. I understand that very well. About the poem, I must say there's many mispellings, but the only one that bothered me was that fantasy was mispelled. Since it is the main thought of the poem, I just wanted to let you know. As for me, I should write some more poetry. Keep writing the awesome poetry. -emoCatGirl
I very much enjoyed this poem. It gives the reader a feeling of being lost in fantasy, but caught up in reality. I know that there's times I wish myself that I could get lost in my fantasies, although I'd never leave if I didnt' have to. lol. I think you wrote this clearly, and it has a good structure and flow. Great job hun! Keep up the good work :)
Submission Name: In Between
