Description: ??? I started writing last night. I guess I was inspired by myself.. It's me. Red hair and all, insomnia and imagination. It could be changed a little, tweaked. Maybe I will, maybe I won't. I don't ever know...
This is such a good poem. I can relate, It sounds like something writen based on my life. Even the train passing by fits my life. It was good. I could picture it all. . and you used good words to describe things! And thats a turn on with poetry . . atleast for me it is. Keep up writing . . and I really hope to read more things from you, because you seem to be very talented. GJ
I can relate entirely. I feel that way every night. This is really good. Perfect description. The crazy hair, eyes still lined in black, radio on, staring into the darkness...I could see myself in every word. Beautiful write. Great job :-) I love it.
Lolful! I swear- I just did thys a day ago- except my hair as short and dark brown and my alarm clock numbers are an eerie red... Plus- Iím a dude!
Okay- Iím done messing around- thys was great- got the perfect image even though I already knew it. It reeked of desperation and the frustration of knowing it will not come. The format itself made me listless... Nice work!
Now- I am off to shower. (so fresh and so clean- clean!) -The Madd One~