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    dots Submission Name: Procrastinationdots

    Author: Katj
    ASL Info:    17/F/IL
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 103/89/24
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I wrote this instead of starting my speech.

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    Once again Iíve fallen in the trap-
    The trap of procrastination.
    And my only escape
    Is to gnaw off my leg and accept the responsibility.
    I thought I was changing
    Into the worker bee that we all should be.

    But here lay my work-
    Itís amazing the lengths
    That we will go to
    Avoid the inevitable.
    Unaccepting the wrath will later face.

    Submitted on 2005-05-17 18:31:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      LOL, I can so connect with that. I am supposed to be studying for my exam, but i think i'll procastinate till later. The rhythm is good. The alliteration is well. I suggest though to modify the last line. It seems a little misplaced or off the beat created by the rest of the poem.
    | Posted on 2005-05-17 00:00:00 | by Lee Minsu | [ Reply to This ]
      haha wow I can totally relate to this. It really made me laugh when I read it because you just say it. I love this. Its short but to the point and its great.
    | Posted on 2005-05-17 00:00:00 | by rockunsilenced | [ Reply to This ]

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