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    dots Submission Name: Lecture Halldots
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    Author: Lee Minsu
    ASL Info:    20/Male/Seoul
    Elite Ratio:    4.61 - 101/96/27
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 327
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 996



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       Actually, it was right before my discussion/class on human rights and sexuality. Before I entered the room, I caught a glimpse of an old crush. Here's what I had to say.


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    It was worth a shot
    To try to get into your mind
    Read your thoughts
    Predict your moves
    It would have been grand to melt in your arms
    Breathe your scent
    Massage your shoulders
    Broad and strong
    Bearing the weight of your burdens

    I wondered what made you tick
    The thin line between reason and passion
    I wanted to cross it
    Blur your senses
    Using your passion for violence
    And that violence into sex
    Raw
    Brutal
    From scratches to rugburns
    You are so much better when you hold rage in your hands
    But how could I forget
    Mixing reality with creativity
    That you of all males
    Could fulfill my fantasy
    Throw me
    Fuck me
    Til I have tears in my eyes
    And all the while
    You sit patiently
    Noding your head
    Off in a different world
    As the professor lectures
    You drift off to sleep




    Submitted on 2005-05-17 18:37:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well this sounds like my wondering mind during class, and ya know what i think i failed that class... i couldnt help it thogh, the guy was just simply gorgeous, with these big hands and you could just tell he'd know what to do with them haha great write here
    -steph
    | Posted on 2005-07-31 00:00:00 | by playcrackthesky | [ Reply to This ]
      OOOOOH this one was better than the other one i read! i bit more explicit-loving it Lee! Fave lines of mine "Using your passion for violence
    And that violence into sex
    Raw
    Brutal
    From scratches to rugburns"
    . . . ooooh that was good!

    Keep spreading the love
    Nadia*
    | Posted on 2005-07-29 00:00:00 | by AfricanPrincess | [ Reply to This ]
      omg, I loved that! It was so different from your normal style but I could still tell it was you writing it.

    "The thin line between reason and passion
    I wanted to cross it
    Blur your senses"

    best damn line ever! you are so ab-fab! keep it up!

    kris
    | Posted on 2005-05-17 00:00:00 | by drowning_queen | [ Reply to This ]
      wow, that was quite a read. The flow was a little bit strange. However you're imagery was very very good haha. You tied up the ending very well. Good Job.
    | Posted on 2005-05-17 00:00:00 | by rockunsilenced | [ Reply to This ]



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