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    dots Submission Name: She Bloomeddots
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    Author: cuddledumplin
    ASL Info:    36/ f/UK
    Elite Ratio:    4.08 - 6269/5927/526
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       This is a found poem from pg. 77 of Sandra Cisneros The House on Mango Street. MLA citation:

    Cisneros, Sandra. The House on Mango Street. New York: Vintage, 1989. 77.

    I used the same method to do this poem as I did A Certain Light, so if you are interested, read that one and the description.


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    dotsShe Bloomeddots
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    She bloomed beautiful rosebuds
    of lavender satin flights
    and homesick hollyhocks
    startled pink




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      I like this very much. Puts me in mind of a fresh faced young girl sitting in a field of flowers thinking about her lover....that is what made her blush.
    | Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by angela~ | [ Reply to This ]
      Great write!
    The hollyhock startled into pinkness!! A great image. But I might be lost on the meaning of the poem. It was beautiful all the same - like something Oscar Wilde might have written to describe an enchantingly beautiful belle of the ball. Or perhaps there's some other level to this poem that I'm missing entirely (I apologize for gross stupidity if I am missing out).
    Peace, O
    | Posted on 2004-04-06 00:00:00 | by Occam | [ Reply to This ]
      you get really interesting poems out of your method. I like it very much. it also remindes me of spring. I want spring!! today it snowed again.... anyway great poem.
    | Posted on 2004-04-06 00:00:00 | by eve1684 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is realy pretty. I like it. seems very springtime relevant too . please tellm ethoug, what is a hollyhock?
    | Posted on 2004-04-06 00:00:00 | by brokenmuse | [ Reply to This ]


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