My Fears!

Author: Evie ASL Info:    19/f/oh Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 80 /84 /30 Words: 106

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My Fears!

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The fear of losing faith. The fear of losing that, last breath. The fear of losing that, last beat of my heart. The fear of losing life, haunts me deep inside. The fear of this day, sadly brings me joy. The thought of no, more pain almost, makes me happy. The thought of leaving, you alone and hurt, drags me down. So I continue to frown, for your love is so strong. It would do me no wrong. So I follow my heart. It tells me to stay. So my fears I shove away. I love you baby and true to you, I will stay.

Submitted on 2005-05-18 07:36:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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i liked the repetiveniss and the flow. Went smoothly. I got that what you fear you desire but at the same time you have someone to hold on to.

| Posted on 2005-05-18 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]

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