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    dots Submission Name: Progeny Of The Voiddots
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    Author: DarkenedSoul
    ASL Info:    30/m/astral dreams
    Elite Ratio:    4.29 - 77/60/17
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 237
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Please read my poem BEFORE my comment.
    I'd like to know what you believed it to be about before you read this.I wrote this about being trapped in a single state where nothing ever seems to change and hopes and dreams have long faded; about wanting to live and experience life but never being able to.


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    dotsProgeny Of The Voiddots
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    Darkened heart, twilight soul;
    love's passionate flame
    smothered in the vacuum of self,
    recessed memories slip and fade away;
    slivers of my mind.
    I am the progeny of the void
    slowly consumed in my mother's womb;
    drowning in the nothingness of my existence.
    The screaming babe that once reached out
    for something; anything to hold onto
    slowly has accepted his fate;
    to drift and die in hollowed space
    without ever truly having lived.




    Submitted on 2005-05-18 08:53:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      for some reason this brought to mind outerspace., like the unknwn akasha.. probally just me...It was good.about a nothingness state of ..mind?
    | Posted on 2005-05-18 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]
      Well i have to say this is a really good poem. and i mean really good. *looks at deviant art stuff* well sorry this comment would be longer but i ahve to go to calss so THNX

    - Nammy
    | Posted on 2005-05-18 00:00:00 | by Namlooc20 | [ Reply to This ]



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