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    dots Submission Name: Her versus Medots
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    Author: Kitty
    ASL Info:    14/F/Vermont
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 23/29/12
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 822
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    dotsHer versus Medots
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    HER

    Shiny blonde hair
    Bright blue eyes
    The kind of girl
    That gets all the guys

    Super slim
    Way tall
    Flat chest
    But she still gets them all

    Popular of course
    Smart enough to pass
    Athletic she is
    And he's hers, alas!

    ME

    Pained hazel eyes
    Long red hair
    She's got him
    And it's not fair

    Described as soft
    Average in height
    34C
    And ready to fight

    More than a little crazy
    Smart as a whip
    Sweet to him
    But it does zip

    ~~~~~

    She has what
    That I haven't got
    Other than his heart
    Apparently a lot

    So throw us in a ring
    And the first to die
    Loses it all but the
    Other girl gets the guy

    I count the days
    Until he's mine
    And I suppose 'til then
    I'll do just fine




    Submitted on 2005-05-18 18:01:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I thought this threw this weirdo subject in a commical light. Mainly it's supposed to make me laugh when I'm feeling particularly murderous *glances arond* jk. Thanks peoples! I'm glad this made you giggly sad.
    | Posted on 2005-05-18 00:00:00 | by Kitty | [ Reply to This ]
      This was pretty good. I loved the whole thing, it kinda made me laugh, but at the same time it was sad. Maybe that's just me?
    | Posted on 2005-05-18 00:00:00 | by Akili | [ Reply to This ]


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