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My Beautiful lover His warm embrace His kisses linger Like the smile on my face. Slowly He enters My breath is stolen As warm and wet Meets hard and swollen A poetic rhythm And a gentle caress His kiss so warm It melts my breast Going in deeper As I welcome you Two become one Me with you Poetic passion Sweet harmony This perfect fit Of you to me Why can’t we stay this close forever? Just you and me Wendy and Trever |
Oh wow...I'm neck deep in the sex industry and this made me blush a little lol. Wonderful work darling. Steve was right...erotic (exotic even) and sensual, very passionate, very sweet and loving. Just beautiful. Be well ![]() ~Rachel~ | Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by nebnim | [ Reply to This ] | And you said I was making you blush..... | Great piece of work. Very erotic without being nasty. Also has a very romantic feel to it. Trever's a lucky man. Steve | Posted on 2005-05-19 00:00:00 | by Lost Sheep | [ Reply to This ] | hmmm This piece makes me want to go wake up my honey and forget about trying to get my percentage up! This is one of the most erotic things I've read on this site. I love how you state the obvious without stating the obvious. A very classy way to write a very erotic piece. The whole thing just flows. I usually feel that rhymes and eroticism do not mix, but you have proved me wrong. | Thanks for sharing! -Chell- | Posted on 2005-06-16 00:00:00 | by Chell | [ Reply to This ] | |