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Beautiful lover

ASL Info:    30/F*GA
Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 44 /68 /23
Words: 94
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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Beautiful lover

My Beautiful lover
His warm embrace
His kisses linger
Like the smile on my face.

Slowly He enters
My breath is stolen
As warm and wet
Meets hard and swollen

A poetic rhythm
And a gentle caress
His kiss so warm
It melts my breast

Going in deeper
As I welcome you
Two become one
Me with you

Poetic passion
Sweet harmony
This perfect fit
Of you to me

Why can’t we stay
this close forever?
Just you and me
Wendy and Trever

Submitted on 2005-05-19 03:25:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Oh wow...I'm neck deep in the sex industry and this made me blush a little lol. Wonderful work darling. Steve was right...erotic (exotic even) and sensual, very passionate, very sweet and loving. Just beautiful. Be well
| Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by nebnim | [ Reply to This ]
  And you said I was making you blush.....

Great piece of work. Very erotic without being nasty. Also has a very romantic feel to it. Trever's a lucky man.

| Posted on 2005-05-19 00:00:00 | by Lost Sheep | [ Reply to This ]
  hmmm This piece makes me want to go wake up my honey and forget about trying to get my percentage up! This is one of the most erotic things I've read on this site. I love how you state the obvious without stating the obvious. A very classy way to write a very erotic piece. The whole thing just flows. I usually feel that rhymes and eroticism do not mix, but you have proved me wrong.
Thanks for sharing!
| Posted on 2005-06-16 00:00:00 | by Chell | [ Reply to This ]

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