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    dots Submission Name: Self-madedots
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    Author: amun
    Elite Ratio:    6.53 - 31/14/9
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       journey in perceptions


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    dotsSelf-madedots
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    no one owns the rights
    to this space called Self
    it belongs to infinity
    and waves of spirit ripple
    from this stone slashed
    through invisible waters.
    the trinity,
    heart   soul   mind
    a flat-line triage
    of light beams balanced.
    I am the mysts of time
    seeping into her majesty's
    pyramid, as man made
    mountains before his ache
    to move them.
    I am the scarab scurrying
    away in clouds of dust,
    the ashes of Vesuvius
    fall like choking rain
    the escape...a cool
    crack of lightning,
    plastic phoenix rides my dashboard.









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