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To a Best Friend


Author: Enleigh
ASL Info:    16/f/WI
Elite Ratio:    2.32 - 21 /32 /13
Words: 93
Class/Type: Poetry /Friendship
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this is just for my best friend Kala thats all..


To a Best Friend



People come and go,
people make me feel low
but you allways stay
day after day.

I'm so lucky to have a friend
who will allways be here to the very end.
Allways beibg able to make me smile,
and helping me through every trial.

You bring me up every day,
and you allways know what to say.
I will allways belive in you,
and care for you too.

You say you'll allways care
and a best friend is so rare
for this I thank you
K.K I love you!




Submitted on 2005-05-19 16:00:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  thank god its not like the other friendship peom i read.it wasnt even really a poem it was like a statement outta a book.Anyways this is really sweet.I wish i had a best friend like you described in this poem.And thank god this was a poem lol.Umm you are talented.keep wrting.
alysun-lynn
| Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by Rainin_Raspbery | [ Reply to This ]
  Awwwwww... that was really cute.. i liked that alot.. its going on my favs! you had a few spelling errors but other than that it was good.. keep up the good work and never stop writing!
| Posted on 2005-05-19 00:00:00 | by AnointedPoetess | [ Reply to This ]


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