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    dots Submission Name: Exhaustiondots
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    Author: Ajyra
    ASL Info:    18/female
    Elite Ratio:    4.19 - 65/57/22
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 324
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    Bytes: 342



    Description:
       Written on the spur of the moment, when I'd just recovered from some serious overextension of self. Seems to be missing something, but maybe that's just me.
    :3


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    Exhaustion pours over,
    Mind falling from view,
    Body letting go of it all,
    An endless descent.

    Weakened, tired,
    pushed to the brink,
    And past, to the other side.

    Movement is pain,
    Thought is death,
    Energy is depleted.

    Exhaustion is complete.




    Submitted on 2005-05-19 16:46:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is a good write and portrayed your emotions well. it's short and simple but says a lot. ~sorry i can't think of anything good to say but i think the exhaustion has spread~
    good write.
    -the wildchild
    | Posted on 2005-05-19 00:00:00 | by wildchild | [ Reply to This ]



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