Description: I can't even express myself anymore, this man has me so smitten, so engulfed in happiness that Its even hard to think. No matter what anyone thinks of this poem, it's meant for only one. It's from the heart.
Out of nowhere
There he was
Far more than a knight in shining armor
Even more than the man of my dreams
Miles away, yet still so close
He's made residence in my heart
Slipped inside my world, my soul
A delicious uproar, cracking the walls that have held me strong
How did this happen?
How could this be?
Just when I wasn't paying any attention
A splash in the serene waters
He causes waves, a whirlpool of laughter
Hurricanes to smiles
It began as a simple post
How amazing he writes
Pouring his heart, his being into words
I was enraptured by his depth
An inspiration became more
These feelings shout from my eyes
He knows me...
Thank you for the smiles
For giving me hope again
Showing me that God may have a deeper destiny for me...
I think that line says it all, and after talking to you, I know this is how you felt about him. Just reading this, and knowing how you feel now really drives into the heart of it all.
This poem shouts of you, and it's a sweet calling card to how you wanted to express your feelings for this person. I guess all I can say to you is, remember the happy moments and try to read this when you can. You'll be happy again one day.
this was really good. even though it is hard to express your feelings i think that you did a beautiful job in putting it into this. It had great feeling.. i think your very happy indeed. He's a lucky guy ;) -joy
This is really a great write and I know he'll think the same. Your descriptions flow so well, but I often find that when I'm on a high of emotion, so is my writing. It's also great to see that some do meet great ppl on the net, and that some relationships do work. My brother is marrying his chat friend this summer. So more power to you. jan
Very wonderful. In particular I loved the imagery of - "He's made residence in my heart". That says so much with such simple beauty. Whoever he is I hope he knows how lucky he is to have you. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!
this is a lovely piece. you've done a good job portraying your emotions, they seemed to have jumped out at me while i was reading. there's also some very pretty images. ~so how does it feel to be so smitten?~ good luck with your writings and this guy, whoever he is. -the wildchild
wow, beautiful writing, beautiful images...sounds like you've got it bad! i don't know who this guy is, but it sounds like what you're feeling, what you're experiencing, is almost overwhelming. how many people want to experience that kind of connection? everyone. whoever he is, he's blessed.
nice.nice. . . i have stoped reading romantic poerty after i broke a 2yr relationship with my boyfriend. so the reason y i started again is because like you i've had a really special guy suddenly walk into my life and i can so relate when you say "Just when I wasn't paying any attention" it's kinda beautiful that way because it's almost like love came looking for you just when you stoped searching for it . . . .go and fulfil ur destiny Keep spreading the love Nadia*
oooh nice i like it. remember the feeling, being so (to use your word) smitten by some guy. *usher singing in the background: "you got it you got it bad"* sorry (giggles) you had some really nice imagery in here, the whole "serene waters" and the like. i love the last line "a destiny that awaits in your arms". that is just so beautiful. lucky guy. ...bb...