Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Resolutiondots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: acapone
    ASL Info:    32mnh
    Elite Ratio:    1.87 - 24/25/10
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 809
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 286



    Description:
       What are you looking for in terms of feedback? Any background information behind the piece? Hints? Is this just to vent? Emotional state while writing?


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsResolutiondots
    -------------------------------------------


    diluted by the thoughts of my peers.
    push on with no worry or fears
    speak no more of your jagged past
    your soul will never last
    but I can not forget my evil ways or
    cloud my past with the darkest haze
    Resolution is what I crave.





    Submitted on 2005-05-20 11:05:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      i particularly liked your soul will never last. that is a very powerful line. it links the first part and the second. excellent job. very powerful ending. the never ending journey of understanding and truth. excellent write. keep it up.
    | Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by Dorian Grey | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it! I can totally relate! Good job of expressing ur feelings!"but I can not forget my evil ways or cloud my past with the darkest haze" is my fave line.
    | Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by Amanda_d19 | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    59693

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry