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    Author: Soldier O_Tears
    ASL Info:    18/M/INDONESIA
    Elite Ratio:    2.27 - 41/127/119
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 240
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 767



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    I never be the best lover you ever had
    Even though i've wrote thousands of lovesongs
    The distance of your image from my vision became so long
    But i walked, I ran , i fell, then i stood and chased you so bad

    Being Sad,being glad or being dead
    I cannot choose which way to go to chase you
    and ways to make you pleased

    Hows it going to be
    A depressed marathon race to keep up with you
    Or a desperate sprint i will face to win your heart
    Athletically im not qualified
    Poetically im adequate to run in words with you

    Running through flows
    Running through rhymes
    and fall apart in the finish line
    In the end of the line
    End of page




    Submitted on 2005-05-20 11:44:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is a wndeful Write! I love everything about this poem...And I relate to it so well! Love the symbolysm, love the flow and my fave line is "Poetically im adequate to run in words with you" You rock!...keep up the good work!
    | Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by Amanda_d19 | [ Reply to This ]



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