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    dots Submission Name: Personal Declarationdots
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    Author: ViCiOuSWrItEr
    ASL Info:    18/Female/Desolate
    Elite Ratio:    3.97 - 890/865/108
    Words: 375
    Class/Type: Story/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 1065
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 2393



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       this is my personal declaration from society...


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    dotsPersonal Declarationdots
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    When, in the course of human events, it becomes necessary for humans to provide utter individuality and set themselves apart from the rest. The time has come for all to be equal yet different in distinct ways. No more conformists.
    Therefore, I am declaring complete independence from society. I hold these truths to be self-evident: That all beings are created equal, equal and different; that they are produced by their Creator, whoever or whatever that may be, individually and atypicaly. All beings are born with characteristics that will forever separate them from being the same otherwise identical to one another. That to secure the rights to a personality, to an opinion, I declare the freedom from our controlling, egotistical society.
    They have robbed me from within.
    They have robbed me from originality.
    They have instituted self-righteous cliques against all that detach.
    They have instituted parades cutting down the docile.
    They have inebriated the blind with their na´ve patrons.
    They have intoxicated the deaf with their biased leaders.
    Dickinson and Poe have died twice from their incompetence.
    Illiberal heads turn from Beethoven and Bach.
    They have truly become incognito, simply illusive.
    They have even fooled themselves.
    They have excluded me in result of my diacritical mark.
    They have condemned me in result of my self-respect.
    They die from forced anorexia.
    They die from bulimia.
    They have prepared a holocaust of my beliefs.
    They have murdered my tradition.
    They have raised a brow at my crestfallen individuality.
    They have raised the suicide rate due to lack of attention.
    They have robbed me of my passions.
    They have emptied my holster.
    In all that has been stated, I have repeated in question as to why these creatures have tortured me so. They have not been able to answer with real response, yet they continue to destroy my ability to have eccentricity. Society has looked me in the eye, and under a God I have stared back in control. I, therefore, the executed soldier of humanity, declare freedom of speech, dress, religion, thoughts, beliefs, and persona upon myself and the rest of the world without assumption of labels, stereotypes, or classifications.




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      i know how you felt writting this.... society sucks ass and we have to bear with them and their screwd up ideas. But no... seperation and emancipation must be made.... what is freedom when you belong to an abusive master.... absolutely lovely... the raw emotiuons... like meat cooked so rare, it's still moo-ing.... i love it...
    | Posted on 2006-03-23 00:00:00 | by diamonds_2_dust | [ Reply to This ]
      Have you sent this to the National Archives? :)

    I very much enjoyed reading it and I hope you are not offended by my saying this but it a brought a genuine smile to face in appreciation for your spunk.

    And by the way my two favorite lines are :

    "They have robbed me of my passions.
    They have emptied my holster."

    Very visual. Thank goodness they have left you plenty of talent!
    | Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by rankamateur | [ Reply to This ]
      wow! holy crap. this was the best thing i have flippin read in a LONNGGGG time. i probaby think u are the coolest person EVER. u have stated on a peice of paper what runs through my mind all the time. this "personal" declaration should be incorporated to ALL people. this is flippin the bomb. no joke. im speechless. wow. good good good freakin job.

    Cat
    | Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by dancer06 | [ Reply to This ]
      All I have to say...to that wonderful, beautiful, perfect declaration...is just...Dude. You pwn. I love you. Love this. It's perfectly uberbrill to tenth of all things rofty nofty and sevenine in general.
    Stand up for your individuality! Be who you want! POWER TO THE POPCORN!...or...people, or something. O.o YOU RAWK! -hugs randomly and scampers off-
    ~Sicobe R. Crow
    | Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by Crow | [ Reply to This ]
      *bows*

    Preach it sister...preach it...

    This was a very liberal pice. You really really really made a punch in this one. Were you on a rampage or what?

    Dam! I haven't read anything this powerful in a LONG time! You really spoke maturely and were dignified.

    Loved it!

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2005-08-25 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]


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