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Author: painofthanatos Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 684 /571 /86 Words: 87

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listen up asshole I never wanted your body Never dreamt of you Never thought of you as sexy Don't bother trying to lie No one believes your crap They know me And all of us have snapped You've done this crud before In fact they're willing to talk And if the authorities do nothing You won't be able to walk So just watch your back, I'm not taking your bullshit And when I kick your ass At least I can say its completely legit

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OK! I guess this is for the wanker that you mentioned in your journal. Tell you what to do: Photocopy forty copies. Post at school early one morning. Everywhere! Enjoy. And have an innocent smile on... Hope you can get through this, just remember, a wanker like him is just not worth ruining YOUR life for. Be Happy Graeme

| Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]

That was good and it was short, but it might the point loud and clear, and whatever that [censored] did to you I hope you hurt him just the same or worse because no one deserves to be lied about(and I know how that goes, a lot of people at my school think I shoot up and I don't) There was no spelling errors and the stanzas were in good order and the flow that this poem has is good even if it is just a vent, just remember you will always have your friends to fall back on so don't get to mad( I really don't say stuff like that but someone just said it to me so I am saying it to you). I hope things get better for you. ~liz~

| Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by Fadingperson | [ Reply to This ]

We'd all better hope that we don't get what we deserve. I hope I don't at least. One cannot live without being hurt by others - and without hurting others ourselves. And not hurting others ourselves is one of the biggest challenges we all face in life. Good riddance to him. Shake the dust off your sandals and start over again.

| Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by rankamateur | [ Reply to This ]

wow that is awful. I feel for you. Sometimes guys can be suck pricks. I have been in situations like that before and they suck. I never took it as far as you did. But hey more power to ya. You may be lucky in that fact that it didnt go any fatrher than it did. Thank God it didnt it. I hope it all works out for you in the end and he gets what he deserves.

| Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by ThatWasOnceMe | [ Reply to This ]

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