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    dots Submission Name: Sacrificedots
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    Author: Crash
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    Sacrifice


    They say that when a baby smiles,
    The angels are talking to him,
    Some say its a bodily function,
    But he wouldnt know to laugh at that,
    So lets say the angels do talk to them,
    Could an angel have warned Daniel,
    That Death would intrude your home soon?
    I saw you there in the hospital,
    Echoing in my head a thousand times,
    There is no God, There is no God,
    And then I saw you bang your head on the wall,
    You dropped to your knees there in the hall,
    Hoping the wounds on your head,
    Would convince Death to take you instead,
    What led up to this frightful night,
    That would take another of our sons away?
    There is an unexplained reason,
    Why he got so sick the day before,
    Yet his doctor turned you away at the door,
    And why on this night, did he sleep by your side,
    Did you not trust the angels to hold him as he cried?
    Maybe he knew of something bigger planned,
    A war he'd been called to fight,
    He lay there by your side like a million times before,
    As you lay sleeping, a breeze through the window,
    And Death at your door, awakening him,
    Raising his body, raising his only weapon,
    Up onto your chest, as he fought off Death,
    A fight that only he could fight,
    With an army of angels by his side,
    Be proud Mike, for you will never know,
    He protected you from Death's crushing blow



    In loving memory of Daniel Jacob Morgan
    March 1, 2000 - March 21, 2000


    ©2004 RON MORGAN




    Submitted on 2005-05-20 16:26:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Indeed, a parent's worse fear. I am totally speachless. This type of loss has never happened to me, so I would be a fool to say, I know how you feel. I can only offer my deepest sympathies and prayers.
    Carol
    | Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by wannabe1 | [ Reply to This ]
      this is so incredibly poignant and touching.. when a child dies, there is nowhere to put the pain. it seems so wrong.. you have written a beautiful piece. thank you for sharing.
    !Cat
    | Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      I found this very moving. As a father one of my greatest fears is that I should outlive any one of my children. These lines;

    "You dropped to your knees there in the hall,
    Hoping the wounds on your head,
    Would convince Death to take you instead,"

    Almost creates too vivid an image in my mind and my heart to bare. It is also describes what my own reaction would likely be should such a tradgety befall my family. Thanks for posting it - it could not have been easy to write.
    | Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by rankamateur | [ Reply to This ]
      This is one, I've never read before, and it brought tears to my eyes and an ache to my heart. The conversational tone mingled with your imagery made this so vivid, but it also made me ache with the fear of loss that only a parent can know.
    In my other life (before teaching) I saw the death of too many children and each one stabs at you like a knife, and makes you hold on to your own children a little tighter when they give you a hug and "I love You"
    jan
    | Posted on 2005-05-20 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]
      this was truly touching and so full of emotion and heartfelt saddness. I am so sorry to read this happened and hope strength will find you, carry you during this time of sorrow. I wish you all the best, this is a great poem, and must have been so hard to write. Take care!
    | Posted on 2005-06-01 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]


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