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Submission Name: Schizophreniacting dots

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Author:	gavinspikenard
ASL Info:	20-something/m/USA
Elite Ratio:	2.85 - 273/334/104
Words:	104

Class/Type:	Poetry/Them
Total Views:	369
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Schizophreniacting dots

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Let's be serious
Call it what it is (instead of what it looks like)
Burdens borne on backs of the befriended
One more thing we never knew to think of
Game time's no longer as fun as it used to be
Counting the ways every moment is hated:
1, 2, 3, infinity
Uncertainty first, then rivalry
You learn something new about a guy every day
(Not that I'm thrilled to admit it while with you)
If I asked a simple question,
could I expect an honest answer?
Yes?
No?
"Yes"
"No"
Welcome to the brink of psychobabble,
where speech is all but sincere...

Submitted on 2005-05-21 06:06:28 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ok I like it first off. The battling lines arguing back and forth would be what a schizophrinic would hear. Very cool. I think you were able to capture that state and that is definatly how good writers evolve. Keep it up (your good poems)!
| Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by St. Agatha | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this poem because it makes me think. I like the way it is so complicated and simple at the same time. I agree with brokensmile it is frustrating trying to get a straight answer from boys. well anyways this was good I enjoyed reading it.
| Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by EL | [ Reply to This ]
  there are many ways to interpret this poem...and none of the ways i did made since lol. but it was reallly a cool piece all the same. i really understood and related to the last bit of this poem. its frustrating trying to get an honest answer from boys and it rarely happens. -nice write
| Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by brokensmile | [ Reply to This ]
  This is confusing, but good, and captivating. The picture I think kind of clears it up. Like..idk..I can't explain it. Somehow I like this poem, yet I get confused by it. Good job!
~Kat
| Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by MorbidAngel114 | [ Reply to This ]
  i got a little confused which is possible what you wanted. it was very intoresting to read the set up was great. i liked it even though i did not understand it. good work lia
| Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by lili | [ Reply to This ]
  hmm. well this poem was pretty interesting to read, but i kinda got confused along the way. oh well. lol. well i can't say anything else about your poem because i didn't really understand it, so laters
~kriss
| Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by juss_kriss | [ Reply to This ]

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