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    dots Submission Name: Monkeysdots
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    Author: Kitty
    ASL Info:    14/F/Vermont
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 23/29/12
    Words: 244
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Comedy
    Total Views: 735
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1599



    Description:
       I just wanted to show you my little twist on this children's song.


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    dotsMonkeysdots
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    Five little monkeys jumpin' on the bed
    One fell of and bumped his head
    Mama called the doctor and the doctor said,
    "No more monkeys jumpin' on the bed!"

    Four little monkeys jumpin' on the bed
    One fell of and bumped his head
    Mama called the doctor and the doctor said,
    "No more monkeys jumpin' on the bed!"

    Three little monkeys jumpin' on the bed
    One fell of and bumped his head
    Mama called the doctor and the doctor said,
    "No more monkeys jumpin' on the bed!"

    Two little monkeys jumpin' on the bed
    One fell of and bumped his head
    Mama called the doctor and the doctor said,
    "No more monkeys jumpin' on the bed!"

    One little monkey jumpin' on the bed
    He fell of and bumped his head
    Mama called the doctor and the doctor said,
    "I said no more of your fricken little brats jumping on the goddam bed! I'm calling Social Services!"

    *And Mama was charged with five counts of negligent homicide and plead guilty because all five of her monkeys had severe concussions and died within the week. Mama rotted in jail until her death because she got five consecutive sentences. AND THE MORAL OF THIS STORY HIS DON'T HAVE CHILDREN (ESPECIALLY FIVE OF THEM) BECAUSE IN GENERAL THEY RUIN YOUR LIFE OR BECAUSE YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO WATCHING THEM BUT WERE MORE INTERESTED IN BRAD AND JEN GETTING BACK TOGETHER. ALWAYS USE PROTECTION*




    Submitted on 2005-05-21 09:10:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Lol, I remember that from when I was little, I lied how you twisted it up a little! It was funny! Thanx for sharing

    ~Nichole
    | Posted on 2005-05-25 00:00:00 | by fallenpopcorn10 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it. i get the feeling you know how to make people laugh a lot always a good thing to have. Good work on the pome though and thanks for sharing.
    ~Darlene
    | Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by FallenAngle2005 | [ Reply to This ]


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