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    dots Submission Name: I told you so...dots
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    Author: Destined
    ASL Info:    17/f/wisconsin
    Elite Ratio:    5.29 - 86/68/17
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 206
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Someone I know doesn't seem to care if others get hurt by the words they say. However, want pity when she get hurts. Now she is having problems with her boyfriend and at times... I wonder, why do I even care? I was alone when I felt the most hardest preasure of my life so far, and yet everyone runs to me for pity. I think this is only part of the source as to I go into depression.


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    dotsI told you so...dots
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    I told you so,
    But you didn’t listen.
    Too busy flopping about over the person I warned you about.
    Never caring to listen to the words of warning.

    I told you so,
    Did you care to listen?
    I told you he would hurt you.
    But you plugged your ears with your fingers and started to sing to block me out.

    I told you so,
    Why didn’t you listen?
    Now that you are hurt, you want me to feel sorry.
    Now you want to listen?

    I told you so,
    But, I’m not listening.
    I plug my ears up and sing to block you out.
    I do the same as you while saying, “I’m not listening.”

    I told you so,
    This is my lesson.
    I felt the pain you feel now, but you didn’t care.
    Move on with life
    And remember,
    I told you so.




    Submitted on 2005-05-21 16:31:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awesome poem nanana, now tell me who you are saying I told you so too?? tell me tell me, i want to know! well the pome it is really good i love it! there aren't any spelling errors and the flow that is has stays with it through the entire poem whcih is always good, to me this sounds like you are mad and I know you so who are you made at and would you please tell me where you got the idea for this poem? My fav lines are
    "I plug my ears up and sing to block you out"
    and those are my fav because i can so see you doing that because you do, do it so ha
    wuv ya nananana
    ~liz~
    | Posted on 2005-05-22 00:00:00 | by Fadingperson | [ Reply to This ]
      I felt the rage and anger of your poem. Me having had an abusive boyfriend know that when people tell you what he really is you don't want to hear what they have to say. Its like the person has you blindly rapt up in them and you can't get out and you can't see what they really are until the end until its over and sometimes not even then. I'm not quite sure of what to say other than be there for her. (I too have always been alone with no one to turn to in my darkest moments and yet i am the one everyone runs to for help) well neways enough of all that. back to the poem it was well writen! keep it up and know that i'm here if you need someone.
    Hannah
    | Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by Devils Angel | [ Reply to This ]



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