Description: My friend went trough a terrible relationship and now shes just a shell of what she was. if i tried putting it too artistically tell me. thanks!
Where Dwells Annabel? -------------------------------------------
Through the walls
Covered in tears
Lost in a moment
That’s long disappeared
How long have the gardens
Been forgot and neglected
Long past have wilted
And been insect infected
Look in the sky
How the buzzards do wait
Flying in clouds
Of a horrid brown yellowish state
Nothing survives
What was quite grand
All that was fertile
Is now a baron land
And how the temples
That tribute the sublime
Are wasted away
In a lime covered slime
Never more shall the green
Cover these hills
Nor shall the laughter
Be reinstilled
For long wasted
In this valley of sorrow
Where nothing would be better
With no hope for tomorrow
In this place of disrepair
Or what really is a state of hell
Is where shall linger forever forgot
Who now is Annabel
Heartbroken Annabel
I thought this was sadly beautiful. The imagery was so vivid. I could feel how much you care for your friend. The rhyiming worked here, you gave it a good flow. I can tell it was written from your heart and that is what made it so beautiful.
Submission Name: Where Dwells Annabel?
