Sunshine and Water by LucyDiamond

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Author:	LucyDiamond
ASL Info:	17/F/Sky
Elite Ratio:	3.91 - 365/572/251
Words:	85

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	243
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Sunshine and water. All you need is love. WWJD. Lifes philosophies at a glimpse.....

Sunshine and Water dots

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A handful of happiness
A bag full of smiles
Sunshine and water
For miles and miles

A pocket of pansies
A spoonfull of sky
Sunshine and water
Forever, you and I

An earfull of laughter
A hand with another
Sunshine and water
The very best together

A basket of lovelies
A heart full of love
Sunshine and water
Pour down from above

All I could want
All I need to live
Sunshine and water
Really, all I have to give...

Submitted on 2005-05-21 21:28:11 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ok let me take a crack at this one. sushine is a needed element of life as is water. sunshine being photosynthesis and with people necessary heat with other side benefits. water basic in the sustainment of both plants and people. however diving deeper might unlock more clues in this riddle within and enigma. this water from above can be seen as a blessing and so can the sunshine. now the sun and the rain are sometimes viewed by many as an inconvient curse as well it is the same with rain.
in your view I believe you see them as blessing be it from God or fill in the blank. also this view is amplified by the spoonful of sky as if it were some cosmic medicine. the basket of lovelies (flowers?) to hearts to heart if I'm right about flowers is a wonderful illustration. for the flower can represent beauty even peace and so can the heart. the gratitude for simplicities in this poem is unparalled from what I've seen so far. I hope I gave this some justice, mike :)
| Posted on 2005-07-17 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]
  I'm not sure what this poem means but it shows you are happy. Sound's like your talking about love is all you need but I'm not sure if your talking about love with another person or with the lord. I'm not going to get into any religious comments since I was a christian till I was 16 and left that for a numerous amount of reasons. But still Love is all you really need I found it with my girlfriend and that's what keeps me alive and goin each day. A tip I give to you from me is if things get bad dont get depressed because then it only gets worse and you could end up trying to kill yourself well that's what happened to me but you seem like a happy person. Anyways in the description of the poem you should put in there if you are talkin about love in the lord or with a person. Good luck with the writting and religion.
| Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by musclebound350 | [ Reply to This ]
  I think I agree with the person ahead of me..I'm not really sure what you are talking about..but this poem is filled with so much poem you can almost see it. I like happy poems rarely ever relate..but love them not the less. Keep Writing.
| Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by inkonspikuous | [ Reply to This ]
  I dont really understand the sunshine and water thing but this is a much filled poem with happiness I will say that. If you are talking about mother nature or the lord or what have you -I still can't see how the 2 would have to do with eavcjh other- a plant- needs sunshine and water but oxygen would be nice. You know what it doesnt matter his is something I really needed to read-some happiness and joy, especially after writing the piece I just did. If this is your true character(this poem ) I don't sugest reading mine. But this is a llovely piece. Thanks for the light reada and please do tell me what you were refering to.
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| Posted on 2005-05-21 00:00:00 | by LameMansTerms | [ Reply to This ]

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