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Author: JADE
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Emotional state- Reflecting on old relationships, and the lessons ive learned from them. (being glad that i dont regret things that ive done in my life)


It all started with a smile. Then a laugh.
It seemed so innocent, so special, so right.
Followed by good times never by bad.
Anything too good to be true- is.

Soon enough, the truth came, and who you truly was came to light-so bright, it blinded me. Made me curious to find what else about you I didnt know. So I followed this light, and follow I did, only to find, more lies, more betrayal, more deceit, the opposite of who I thought you were.

Its hard. Its hard to come to realize that your a fool. How could I give myself to the one person I should have stayed away from? How could this person make me to want to take back every minute I wasted with them?

Conversations until 5 in the morning, dont mean anything if its a lies.
All the sweet things said, now seem bitter.
All the nice things done, were done for all the wrong reasons.
The feelings felt, werent felt at all.

So when they ask "do you regret giving yourself to him?" I say "nope"

Cause at the end of the day, you've taught me a lesson about life and the pain youve caused me has led me to be stronger in ways you cant comprehend.
So do I have regrets? nah.

Submitted on 2005-05-22 00:03:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Lmao, had a real big twist, but i liked it tho..i know how the whole believing that someone i and thinking its all good and then it turn around and you feel betrayed but unlike you i am stuck inside to what to do, cuz ive found that ive given three chances to the same and theres still some pain...well again gopood work and thanx 4 the laugh, wishes to u...bye
| Posted on 2005-05-22 00:00:00 | by medicated | [ Reply to This ]
  i think that this is well written. and i think that it's good that you don't regret what you did. you made a mistake, but you learned from it, and that's important. i know what it's like to know someone, but in reality, you hardly know anything about them. great job expressing yourself in this poem.
| Posted on 2005-05-22 00:00:00 | by juss_kriss | [ Reply to This ]

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