Description: wow. this is the first piece of its kind. no joke. i don't really believe in love, so don't hurt this too bad cause im usually depressed. I'm not sure where this came from, but i guess i have darin to thank.
I love how -------------------------------------------
I love the way my head fits so perfectly on your chest.
How u hold my hands to tenderly.
I love how you put your fingers through my belt loop.
How you comfort me during a scary movie.
I love how you kiss me so softly that it melts my heart.
How you know just what to do.
I love how innocent you are.
How you are shielded from the world.
I love how you say im the only good in the world.
How my being just makes you happy.
I love your quirky jokes and remarks.
How you tease me and try to tickle me.
I just love the fact that you might love me.
How you make me feel less alone.
this isnt half bad for being your first poem about love. i have some to the conclusion that it is somehting hard to write iif you have never experianced it before. The way you keep all the stanzas the same length and keeping them at two per stanza. not very many people are consistant with there writes.
this is sweet, touching about how it feels to love someone and the little things they do. i like the word "quirk." i call my girl a quirk, she is! it's a good thing. i like the image of the fingers in the belt-loop, it just reads sexy to me. thanks for sharing. !Cat
this was very humble and sweet. of course it's love! take our word for it! love comes in all shapes and sizes and you are very lucky. I wish I had something like that. well, I do, sort of, but there's other problems. I loved the flow of this poem and the images you created. I hope you find an answer to your medical problem too. excellent write!
Excellent job young lady. There is love. When you find the love of your life you will know this beyond all doubt. Now then knowing just what love is beyond infatuation, is another matter altogether. And then there is knowing how to give your love to someone, that too is a different subject. But by lifes end you will have experienced all of these things - and you'll be glad there was such a thing as love.
if you don't believe in love, then i'm britney spears. you may think you don't believe in love, but someone deep inside, you truly do. as for you poem, it was adorable and it reminded me of me, in a way. that is how i feel when i'm around my someone special. i think you did a great job expressing yourself in this poem. great job, keep it up ~kriss
Don't really believe in love? I find that hard to believe and at any rate if you don't then you sure are miss'n out on a lot! From the way you wrote this I think your pulling my leg and in fact you really do believe in love! This is a cute write and I enjoyed reading it. Peace and Love to ya ... !Doc`
Submission Name: I love how
