Dig up your Roots

Author: Voodoo_Lounge ASL Info:    21/F/OH Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171 Words: 39

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Dig up your Roots

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My people- The pagans, Moon worshippers, Sinners, Were interred In this soil. Buried in democracy, Capitalism, Religion. I soon shall follow- Wind in her hair, Moon in my eyes. Dig up your roots, My brothers and sisters. Dance again.

Submitted on 2004-04-06 21:27:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Now THIS one--is terrific. neat and tidy package, beautifully yet simply wrapped---yet containing a bomb that blows me away great write, Silver

| Posted on 2004-04-08 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]

i love it! again with the jim thing your weirding me out now, the concept behind it, the imagery.....great write. and for once, i agree with "dumpin" , you dont need to add a damn thing to it

| Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by love gone wrong | [ Reply to This ]

i like this, but i wish there was more! i can see them all dancing around a fire (not in it!), singing the praises of the moon above. write more! (only if you want to!)

| Posted on 2004-04-06 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]

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