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Dig up your Roots


Author: Voodoo_Lounge
ASL Info:    21/F/OH
Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 408 /588 /171
Words: 39
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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good old fashioned moon-worshipping paganism. I don't know if i like it or not.


Dig up your Roots



My people-
The pagans,
Moon worshippers,
Sinners,
Were interred
In this soil.
Buried in democracy,
Capitalism,
Religion.
I soon shall follow-
Wind in her hair,
Moon in my eyes.
Dig up your roots,
My brothers and sisters.
Dance again.




Submitted on 2004-04-06 21:27:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Now THIS one--is terrific. neat and tidy package, beautifully yet simply wrapped---yet containing a bomb that blows me away
great write, Silver
| Posted on 2004-04-08 00:00:00 | by Silverdog | [ Reply to This ]
  i love it! again with the jim thing your weirding me out now, the concept behind it, the imagery.....great write. and for once, i agree with "dumpin" , you dont need to add a damn thing to it
| Posted on 2004-04-07 00:00:00 | by love gone wrong | [ Reply to This ]
  i like this, but i wish there was more! i can see them all dancing around a fire (not in it!), singing the praises of the moon above. write more! (only if you want to!)
| Posted on 2004-04-06 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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