Very interesting. This was rather complex yet you pulled it all off! You really made the image complete. Both are grey. Black and white...night and day. Great comparison. TO have brought so much in just three lines...that is talent and I am amazed!
I think you have just described life in general. Well done. Original, unique, not the least bit cliché. Good topic for a haiku. Tonight has been a night of deep thought-provoking poetry reading, thank you.
I think it might be a senryu...but who cares anyway? Nice job, amazing what complex thought processes you can start in a few short syllables. Graet job Be Happy Graeme
Yeah, the middle is kinda grey sometimes aint it? When you mix the two opposing ends. This was a nice haiku (bless u) and full of opposing imagery that provides the not so vivid color of grey. Or is it senryu??? I think its a toss up. Anyway, nicely done. Have a good one.
Submission Name: Opposition
