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-Like I Need A Title-

Author: Sephiroth
ASL Info:    22/Male/WA
Elite Ratio:    4.07 - 60 /67 /29
Words: 144
Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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-Like I Need A Title-

I am finally a Super Dead Sheep!
If I wasnt so damn fat,
I would leap.

Joyous the occasion,
When I got this award.
And for all you christian caucasians,
I thank the Lord.

If you dont believe in that stuff,
Then it's all luck,
That ain't even a bluff.

People may say I am a crappy poet.
All I say is, "At least I go for it!"

Back to my old poem,
{Insert Title Here}
I found out the theif wasn't Ron.
It was my dad's can of beer.

The Force was with me,
When I did this amazing feat.
Also when I saw Star Wars,
Which, while I was in line, hurt my feet.

I'm freakin' bored, so I'm on my way,
To saving up for my PS3,
Which (To you Xbox/Nintendo people) is not gay!

Submitted on 2005-05-23 01:31:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  And to everyone who wondered, I did, in fact, get my PS3. I love it very much, and it owns the Xbox 360. But the Wii... Wow. It is too hard to decide which is better.
| Posted on 2007-04-09 00:00:00 | by Sephiroth | [ Reply to This ]
  Okay I'll try not to insult you toooooo much. haha. just joking of course....well it was very random, obviously and it kept my attention at least, but some of it was a little too random. Learn to keep it *just random enough* to hold your readers attention but still keep it a poem.... interesting.

| Posted on 2005-05-29 00:00:00 | by LucyDiamond | [ Reply to This ]
  Alright so this one ryhmed I'll give you that, and the structure might be able to be passed of as reasonable. But what the crap are you talking about. It's like you don't have a meaning in mind you just throw together a bunch of random ryming words. What's created is sort of funny in a kind of "how the heck does he think of this stuff" sense. So I suppose it was alright just seriously dude try something serious with some kind of something in it.

| Posted on 2005-08-16 00:00:00 | by nsnaakyhhh:) | [ Reply to This ]

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