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My Boobs

Author: painofthanatos
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My Boobs

I've told you before
To stop Staring
It does no good
If you won't stop talking
About my *only good feature*

A person tells me
How jealousy they are
That I never seem to worry
About how I look

And all the guys
In the car
Ask why
I would
*All anyone ever notices is her boobs*

They're not even that big
And I don't really like them
I'd give them away
If would get rid of these jerks...

Submitted on 2005-05-23 12:17:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Man do I ever hate it when I get a guy staring at my boobs. It's quite terrible, because sometimes I don't notice becasue I'm really short and I'll think they're looking at my face; then my friend will tell me he was staring at my chest the whole time. And I'm young, so if they grow anymore I mine as well just forget about guys looking at my face lol.

But I like how you put this all together, it was short and simple but it had good form and meaning. Kinda funny too...I likes it :)

Keep up the good work,

Miss M.
| Posted on 2005-12-16 00:00:00 | by fightingirl19 | [ Reply to This ]
  oh yes i hate it when guys stare at my boobs. They may be huge but that doesn't give them the rite to gawk at them. Heh, this was a very humorous, and to true. Many of my friends say they want my breasts because theres are "too small" but if they had them they would want to give them back. And i have caute many men staring at them. tis rather annoying...but anywho good poem, and thank you for the comment on mine :)
| Posted on 2005-12-13 00:00:00 | by cannibal | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice, well guys are like that, not all guys are...but most, unlike me...(I look at other things) But umm yeah, I liked how you displayed your feelings here, and how you said all that people want is this...I love it, you should quote that one line, something like "my face is up here" or whatever

keep em comin

| Posted on 2005-12-02 00:00:00 | by vanhokinshtyl | [ Reply to This ]
  what a write!
good for you!

personally i do not know what the fascination with boobs is... perhaps guys are just jealous coz they aint got none but ugh! why would you want any?!

ive got some of the most smart arsed tshirts ever coz i was so damn tired of ppl having convos with my boobs... "take a picture... itll last longer" has always been a favourite and i have been know to say "hi... is this your eyeball? i found it in my cleavage" theres red and then theres this guys face... i felt kinda mean but he got the message and we have been great mates ever since...

i remember when i started getting boob attention... i went to bed every night and slept on my tummy to try stop them growing any (hehe how silly) but ugh! didnt work!

anyways... i dont think ive ever read a poem on this subject... you are a trend setter... in 60 years ppl will start writing such things and it will all be attributed to you!

hope things are so frustrating for you... ya know... when you get old they'll just look like pancakes and sit on your knees... that aint much to look forward to either haha!
ciao for now!
| Posted on 2005-09-09 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
  I feel like such a boob for staring but my eyes just won't look up when those tiny little nips start to enlarge when you notice me watching!
On the other hand, when a lady checks out my bluejeans it just make a similar reaction, so we both should be sorry!
When you become older you will appreciate all the attention, I HOPE!
By the way, it is nice to read you and you really did well with such a delicate and pointed little set of CIRCUMstances.
| Posted on 2005-08-26 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
  a bit of introspection and self evaluation from the beautiful mind of Ms. P.O.T. ! Of course the title would draw any course male mind (my own included) only to reveale to them the shallowness of their "observations". Nice write. ttyl *hug*
| Posted on 2005-05-26 00:00:00 | by cainboy | [ Reply to This ]
  im an a$$ man myself, so u don't have to worry about that around me. but, uhhh...
*srry, u necklace is so pretty*
the title was nice. i thought this was gonna be an us guys are very shallow, but whatcha gonna do...but go..lesbo?? lmao
good write~nahlij
| Posted on 2005-05-25 00:00:00 | by Aknahlij_d 1 | [ Reply to This ]
  I swear I was talking to your collar bones... hehe j/k... you should step back and watch people in the store... just watch... dont mimic... but watch as a woman is walking toward a man... just take a look at what else we (men AND women) stare at... you may be surprised. Just watch the eyes. Watch where they go. Oh, and watch the woman's eyes too. Its all human I think, to once-over the opposite sex, but yeah I think it may be a tad deviant to stare nonstop at a couple of flesh melons while talking to a woman. That is why I glance up to the collar bones on occasion.
| Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by Crash | [ Reply to This ]
  why the hell do guys do that? its SO anoyying. even if you dont have anything...there eyes seem to be magnetically attrtacted to your chest. god you ARE SO RIGHT IN THIS POEM guys should learn from this! YES THAT MEANS YOU, JERKS! lol i feel better. good write, lots of emotions! keep up the good work, id like to read more of your stuff!!!

love always
| Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by Nirvana | [ Reply to This ]
  *gulp* Now I feel guilty...all these years of admiring beautiful girls, and I now find I'm just a dirty old man! lol
Seriously, you picked a good subject, and the guys should learn from this poem, you can appreciate girls without STARING like a sex fiend at them!
*IDEA* Wear big red earrings that flash on and off: "UP HERE!"
Great work
Be Happy
| Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by wewak11 | [ Reply to This ]
  Hey Courtney... You kno? I’m more of a butt-man myself. Boobs are nice- but to does not matter to me how big or small they may be (personally- I lyke a little under a handful the best) And I must admit that I too- am guilty for the boob staring on you. But ONLY because you don’t have any pictures of your butt...
Men suck- so I’m sorry for that- but I kno plenty of grrrls who would stare too. Human sexual nature. That’s why my bit<hes neutered me! But- to their surprise- I am un-neuterable! Mwa-ha-ha!
So in conclusion... can I... ummm- touch one?

Peace, love and massive slaps to my face!- Six~

PS- I think your best feature is your style. You got it going on! Plus, you kno- the whole pretty thing you do- because your- pretty... ...naturally...
| Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by Six_Grey | [ Reply to This ]
  this is well, interesting. Yeah interesting, that's it. *ouch* yeah Mieko just hit me for saying something... don't know what either. I just said"*my best feature*" and she hit me. So yeah this is a good write for venting, lol. anyway good job THNX

- Nammy
| Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by Namlooc20 | [ Reply to This ]
  hey dont worry ppl say the exact same about me and it doesnt help that they compare me to peyton, who doesnt have any. the say she has the ass, i have the boobs, and if we were combined then we would be hot. im like thanks...
but anyway, this poem was very conversation-like and sounded more like a vent. id try wording it a little differently if youre planning to make it into anything you wanna turn in :)
| Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by sudie | [ Reply to This ]
  This was funny to me...I guess being a guy. I tend to like the booty so...well, no I like boobs too and...I like legs...and thick thighs-

My name is Brian and I'm a sexaholic. LOL

Nice humorous piece-to me anyway. Sometimes I wish I weren't so fine. LOL

| Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by xtremegentleman | [ Reply to This ]
  Good work. I hate to admit it, but I think I've been guilty of being one of those guys with a neck defect a time or two.

We are all a lot more than our appearance and I've come to the conclusion that no one is completely happy with their own looks. Either something is a bit too small or a bit too big, or it draws too little attention or too much. In the end, we all want to be valued for who we are, not how we look.

In the end, we all get our wish, when we just look ....... old.

Keep up the good work, (and jettison the shallow guys)


| Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by Lost Sheep | [ Reply to This ]
  Geeze! I know exactly how this one feels... I hate it when guys can't seem to look at your face.. its like.. their necks have some muscle defect that makes them unable to hold their head up or keep their eyes on yours. Stupid males. Always thinking with the wrong head.
I guess you figured out I liked this :)
| Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by Childoutspoken | [ Reply to This ]
  grr... i hate that. i have this one friend, good kid really, but everytime i see him in the hallway, he just stares at them. he doesn't even try to hide the fact that he's staring, which makes it even worse. the other thing that's so wrong about it is that i HATE them!

guys, please take a little bit of time to look at a female's other qualities... we have brains... we are intelligent and gifted... talented... and those boobs aren't there for you to stare at while you nod and drool when we're talking. maybe y'all should have your d**** outside of your pants, that way WE have something to stare at when y'all talk. how would you feel then??


| Posted on 2005-05-23 00:00:00 | by Phoenix2004 | [ Reply to This ]

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