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    dots Submission Name: Bound Togetherdots

    Author: Geraldine
    ASL Info:    25
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 241/296/80
    Words: 171
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Another about my son's father.

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    dotsBound Togetherdots

    I've spent so many years trying to mold myself,
    back to the person I once knew.
    It took four years to enable myself,
    to walk with my head held high again.

    In one day, one moment,
    everything I've worked so hard to forget,
    has been forged back into my mind.
    Now memories are seeping from my veins.

    You are my aura,
    for which I can't escape.
    Visions of you stalk my every move,
    my every emotion.
    Your face is a cloud in my head,
    pouring memories into my every thought.

    The anger stabs me, like a knife,
    with every image of you.
    The love, the hate, the confusion,
    all attacking me at once.
    Bruising me, opening the scars,
    that once were healed.

    How do I escape you,
    escape all of this pain?
    When together we hold a future,
    and innocent life to mold.

    No matter our pain,
    no matter our emotions,
    our lives will forever be binded,
    by the remains of our past love...
    our son.

    Submitted on 2005-05-23 15:33:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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